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Architectural:
Do you have floor plans for the adult-only condo? You have the floor-area for the townhome units. Can you dimension this?
I would add more slats within the carports to offer more screening.
Site Design:
The revised site plan looks like there are barriers between the main collector and the interior road network, and I don't see any access points to adjacent parcels, so the entire road looks like it is blocked off.
What are the adjacent land uses? Are there any roads on the edges of the abutting parcels? You might need to provide some sort of bufferyard landscaping, especially if it is a different residential use (single-family residential) or an incompatible use (commercial, industrial, office, etc.).
Landscaping:
I would add more shrubs, ferns, perennials, or grasses in front of the monument signage, along with hidden lighting so this can be visible at night. The sign is about 5'-6' tall and is located very close to the edge of the pavement, which might cause visibility problems. I would repeat the yellow/orange color within the development either as a house color or as accents, as streck suggested. ...
Graphics:
The site plan has drop shadows on the vegetation, but not on the buildings, so the townhomes appear flat.
I really like the rendered perspectives. I assume these were created in Revit or Viz (possibly Sketchup?). What 3-d components did you use: formfonts, I-render plant generator, sketchup 3d warehouse? I am doing similar work on a portfolio right now for grad school. Be very careful when choosing 3d components. The buildings are not rendered to the same level as the trees, flowers, cars, and other components so it can appear unbalanced. In addition to more colors with the townhomes, I think you could add additonal texture to the walls. Are these white-washed? stuccoed?...
Hopefully, my comments were not too interrogating.
