Hi everyone,

I've been lurking for a long time, but this is my first post. I'm trying to tighten up my SOP and was hoping someone who's either currently in a program or a MUP graduate could take a look. It would be very much appreciated. I applied to MPA programs last cycle and the main theme of my essay proved successful, but for some reason I just don't feel very confident about its effectiveness for planning programs.

Thanks!
Ryan